Sections
The guide in short
- Draw the world picture firstDescribe what becomes different in the world if the work succeeds.
- Place the company inside that worldDescribe the role the organisation becomes capable of playing in that future.
- Explain why nowName the forces already moving the market, such as regulation, supply and cost curves.
- Build the journey into the deeper versionLink present reality and future world through the journey, then add the emotional seal.
- Write ambition in honest grammarLabel ambition as ambition and keep forecasts where their evidence can be shown.
- Run the decision testRewrite the vision until it would have made one recent decision clearer.
A useful vision describes the future the company is working towards and is specific enough to change decisions now. For climate and science-led companies, write it as two pictures before compressing it into a statement, first what becomes different in the world if the work succeeds, then the role the company becomes capable of playing inside that changed world. A vision should stretch the organisation and stay honest that the future is still unproven.
A vision sits above the targets
Revenue goals, deployment counts and market-share ambitions matter. They sit below the vision. A goal might say the company intends to deploy 100 systems. A vision describes what becomes possible if systems like these are widely deployed and how the company wants to shape that future.
In the Story System, Brighter Future's six-story framework, the Vision Story sits beside the Origin, Purpose, Customer, Product and Impact stories. Purpose names the problem the company exists to address. Vision shows the world the company is trying to help bring about. The Purpose Story usually comes first, and the vision shows where it leads.
Draw the world picture first
Start outside the organisation. Describe how customers behave differently, what infrastructure exists, what has become normal that is unusual today, which risk is lower and which resource is now available. Describe the landscape, factory, supply chain or decision process that works differently.
This is the world picture. It keeps the vision from turning into a statement about how large the company hopes to become. It also gives investors, partners and employees something they can test against their own view of where the market is going, which makes the vision easier to discuss and harder to dismiss.
Place the company inside that world
Then describe what the organisation becomes if the wider change happens. It might operate infrastructure, supply a standard input, provide a measurement layer, become a trusted project developer, own a platform or let other companies build on its capability. The role has to make sense inside the future the company describes.
If the two pictures feel unrelated, the vision is probably carrying two different strategies. That is useful to find out early. A team that cannot connect its own role to its world picture will struggle to explain to an investor why this company, of all the companies in the space, is the one to back.
Use the changed world to explain why now
A vision can face the future and stay anchored in present reality. Look at the forces already moving the market, such as regulation, supply, cost curves, infrastructure, technology and behaviour. Each can draw a path from today towards the future in the vision.
An example from our own work shows the logic. Eeden turns textile waste into new raw materials for fibre. In our account of its pitch to brands, the company's story rested on three forces already in motion, coming EU rules, future demand for recycled fibre and the gap between that demand and the supply available. The rules are concrete. The EU's revised Waste Framework Directive entered into force in 2025 and makes extended producer responsibility for textiles mandatory across member states, so producers carry responsibility for textiles after sale. Set against those forces, Eeden appears inside a future the market is already moving towards, and its vision reads as a path a reader can check. Our piece on the why-now narrative covers how to pick and evidence forces like these.
A vision should change what the team does this quarter
Run the decision test. A vision the team takes seriously changes something in the next 90 days. It makes one partnership more important than another, or turns a product feature from optional to structural. It points the team at a market it needs to understand better or a buyer group it needs to meet. Or it flags an attractive revenue opportunity that leads away from the future the company says it is building.
If the draft changes none of these, the team is looking at a screensaver, pleasant to look at and no use for a decision. Rewrite it until it would have made at least one recent decision clearer.
Write ambition in honest grammar
Climate companies often write vision in the grammar of certainty. "We will eliminate." "This will end." "Our technology will make." Those sentences describe ambition and read as proof. A Vision Story can be bold and still mark the boundary. "We are building towards a world where" carries the same ambition and is honest about the status of the future.
The same care applies to numbers. A vision that quotes a future market size or an emissions figure as if it were a forecast invites the question of where the figure came from. Label the ambition as ambition, and keep forecasts in the places where the evidence behind them can be shown.
Build the journey into the deeper version
The public statement may be short. The deeper Vision Story explains the path, and a useful structure runs in four steps.
- Present reality
- Future world
- Journey
- Emotional seal
Present reality gives the audience a starting point. Future world makes the destination visible. Journey shows why the current work belongs on the path. The emotional seal explains why the future is worth wanting. Without the journey, a vision drifts into fantasy. A 2024 review in Trends in Cognitive Sciences places much of the value of narrative in its causal structure, the chain that links one event to the next. The journey is where a vision supplies that chain.
Some companies depend on the market understanding something differently. If restored landscapes are to be treated as infrastructure, a company may need to publish evidence and arguments that help the market make that shift. DNAir, a client that captures DNA from the air to show what lives around a site, proposes that this biological information become something organisations use to make decisions. For that to happen, the market has to learn where the information fits. For these companies the vision also defines what the company needs to teach.
Large enough to matter, close enough to believe
The best visions hold a tension between ambition and credibility. Too small and the statement is a goal. Too distant and nobody can test it. The audience should see the thread from what the company does today to the future it describes, even when the path is hard.
As a practical start, write the world picture and the company picture as two separate paragraphs, then write the journey that links them. Test the result against a decision from the last month. Compress it into a public sentence only once the deeper version holds. A climate-company vision earns its place when it helps the organisation decide which better future it is prepared to build towards.
Brighter Future develops Vision Stories as part of its brand strategy work.
Sources and further reading
Brighter Future worked with DNAirRead the case study
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