Part 2 · Build Your Vision StoryLesson 3.4 · 3 min read
Extract and deploy the Vision
You have the deep Vision version. You cut from it the same way, by recognising what is already there. Four things to find.
The Vision extractions
The extraction sheet covers all four with Clara’s answers.
Now the failures, and then your payoff.
Cut your Vision Story
Two cuts, both from the deep version you wrote. Decide the telling first, out loud, until it sounds like you. Then compress it to the line. Everything here is cut.
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