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Part 2 · Build Your Vision StoryLesson 3.4 · 3 min readFree lesson, opening

Extract and deploy the Vision

You have the deep Vision version. You cut from it the same way: recognition, not rewriting. Four things to find.

The Vision extractions

The extraction sheet covers all four with Clara’s answers.

Now the failures, and then your payoff.

Cut your Vision Story

Two cuts, both from the deep version you wrote. Decide the telling first, out loud, until it sounds like you. Then compress it to the line. Nothing here is written fresh; it is cut.

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